Nooo not the duckie!!

That was horrid. Well written, but horrid.

Damn. This was powerful, very powerful. Kids not listening to parents, and the consequences.

Sometimes it’s hard to let kids learn things on their own, but it’s for the best. :)

Very intense, and well done.

bad duckie! I refuse to think that it wasn’t the duckie that drowned.

I don’t really understand how the title works with the story, unless Elsha is right.
Good work, though.