good try Rose! not sure if i’ll be back either. :) think I’ll sip my drink in the back corner..

As corny as this entire rap battle is, I will say it’s a fun and easy read. BTW, well done your non-aggressive Will Smith style rap…

The only part I didn’t like was when you start to second guess your abilities. Not that you have to boast or anything, and I think that all writers, even best selling authors, have doubts about their writing. But that’s hardly a knock — this flowed very well, you showed skill. Gotta love it ;)