Love it! :D

you’ve made life with zombies whimsical and killing them casual. :)

I love how the narrator’s class envy hatred of Mandy drives her forward in the face of a zombie apocalypse.

Might I suggest a blank line between the paragraphs, sometimes a wall of words is hard to read.

Man i hope that thad Clemons,(the kid who used to bully me in Mantasori school) is in that doom, awaiting debraining.