Couldn’t resist putting a sequel on this, partly cause I had a fun idea and partly to do my usual mental trick for something horrific, to twist it around and try to make right what once went wrong.

And yes, I was a huge Quantum Leap fan. Shut up.

well, you succeeded! you made right, but it’s still oh so wrong.

both characters took on a darker persona than I had envisioned in studmuffins prequel, but it works.

IMHO, there was a little too much forshadowing with the statement “and a little something extra.”

Oh, that’s great.

That is superb

Revenge IS always sweeter!

I love it. An eye for an eye…

Wow, I really like this. I enjoyed StudMuffins original, and think this is a brilliant continuation. It has a nice sense of her bringing things back to her terms, nice touch of revenge.
Also I enjoy how you implied the male characters confidence and smugness.