While this didn’t have as much ‘punch’ as some of the other 12 word novels, I found that having my imagination fill in the blanks to be chilling. I suppose that that is in part due to the fact that the requirements for the challenge indicate murder or seeing a loved one. So my mind connected the two and the show was indeed ‘all wrong’. Welcome to Ficly mate. Cheers!

Thanks for the critique.

I’m not going to rate, because I dont think this necessarily matched the challenge. It only implied the challenge boundaries through the fact that it’s entered in this challenge and would be lost as a stand alone.