I really liked this dialogue. Jotha’s arguments seemed very real to me, and this whole scene played very nicely in me head.

I like how you build on THX 0477’s description of Jotha to continue to flesh him out as a solid, practical man. I agree with Orange Oreos: the dialogue is spot-on.

Excellent job developing not only the characters but the situation as well. With his last line you gave it a bit more of that dire situation air I was hoping to get across but had limited space.