You need to clean up your italicized word, ficly is quirky that way, and also, the word “moments” needs to be edited out of the last paragraph, otherwise a good story

I like the humour… and the line “I might just nut you or something.”

If you want my 2 cents… I would suggest adding more details or something unique, to set it apart from other similar stories….

I think this is a fairly common, almost generic scenario, so putting in some twist or turning the idea on it’s head would create more interest for me as a reader.