Based off Rock, Paper, Cynic’s Run, Boy, Run.

It also occurs to me that Peter Chiykowski likes commas…
Rock, Paper, Cynic is a webcomic (mostly), and Peter occasionally writes fiction and records songs. He’s very good.

Lots here bubbling along under the surface, but it wound up a hard read. Perhaps I’m just struggling cause I don’t know the song? Lots of potential, but yeah, hard to follow.

I think the problem is I tried to be very minimal with my sentences here, and I don’t think I did a very good job of it. May have to rewrite it…