Well that was dark. It reads like a slight redux on the creation myth, sort of like things never went the way they were supposed to, and we’ve all been taught a slightly sanitized version to spare us some shame. Neat idea and some intriguing themes.

It reads like a movie trailer voice-over!

Which is actually fairly epic, and suits the story really well – ambiguous, dark, but awe-inspiring and majestic as well… Cool beans! MH :)

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