I’m not going to lie, when it started I thought I was going to be left full of disappointment, bashing my computer screen.
But!
By the end, I was applauding your rather mindbending take on existence and reality and fiction and lots of other high-falutin’ concepts!
The structure looks messy, and puts me off visually, but for practical reasons I can see why you’ve done it…
A couple of issues with capitalisation, and you’re a bit heavy-handed with your ellipses in the first half – but nonetheless I enjoyed it – cool beans! MH :)
Mostly Harmless