Neat story, told in a convincing voice, somewhere between bemused with himself and hesitant about tooting his own horn. Not sure what he did, but it must have been nice.

Thanks THX. I’m just finishing the sequel. (I really tried to put everything into one piece, but it just wouldn’t fit.)

can’t wait for the sequel, it feels like there is something missing between the opening line and the switch first person narrative voice

I like it! This sets up nicely for someone else to sequel.