Interesting way to continue the story from a passive character’s perspective. I liked it.

Thanks! I love playing around with little ideas like that.

I wish I could have counter-balanced a little more of Hillbilly Batman’s fury against the sweet potato pie. As it is, I feel like the gist is there, but it could have been stronger.

Also, as I’m a bystander to the series, I thought it would only be appropriate for my entry to also be that of a bystander.

I agree with Krulltar. I love the narrator’s obliviousness and the way it works with the intensity of the events unfolding around him.