I like how you weaved the sin in more subtly than in the prequel – you almost didn’t need to title it so explicitly… Intriguing plot starting up here – though I can’t stop picturing Pig-Pen as the Comic Book Guy from The Simpsons ? Anyhoo, good work – MH :)
I like how you weaved the sin in more subtly than in the prequel – you almost didn’t need to title it so explicitly…
Intriguing plot starting up here – though I can’t stop picturing Pig-Pen as the Comic Book Guy from The Simpsons ?
Anyhoo, good work – MH :)
Agree with MH on the subtlety of the sin. Nice one :) This Pig-Pen fellow is getting more and more intriguing.
are you tackling all 7 sins? that will make this intriguing.. thank goodness for porches, i’d have been choking through this one with the protagonist!
Ooh, dirty, nasty, conniving, and prideful. What a combination. Looks like you’re working your way through the sins. Nice story developing along the way too.
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