I like this kind of poetic prose, it’s tricky to get right but you handle it well here – for me, it gets better as it goes on, and once you reach the ‘lively vs. dead’ contrasts in the last couple of lines it’s a really thoughtful piece… Well done – MH :)
I like this kind of poetic prose, it’s tricky to get right but you handle it well here – for me, it gets better as it goes on, and once you reach the ‘lively vs. dead’ contrasts in the last couple of lines it’s a really thoughtful piece…
Well done – MH :)
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