Aah! Teacher crush! This kind of lust is my favourite. Lust! My brain has the same conversation recently. I notice things then I’m like, Woah why the Hell did I just think about that?! <3
Hits the spot on two key levels – the inter-head dialogue is brilliantly written, and the reveal at the end is a real shocker!
This is good stuff – using lust subtly rather than just writing some soft-porn and sprinkling the word ‘sin’ in there every now and again was what made it work – MH :)
I liked it, a nice back and forth of the underpinnings of lustful thought and how it can wear down and overpower rational thought. Great entry with that touch of creepiness at the end there suggesting a potential rendez-vous or indiscretion.
Wednesday [PJ] ((LoA))
Mr.Gabriel
Mostly Harmless
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