Should enter this in the Stuuwelpeter Challenge. It’s one of those icky, cautionary tales. Some minor issues with metre in the second and fourth stanzas.
Funny little poem, and I liked the voice/style of it. Seems like you hit at least 5 of the 7. I couldn’t quite find lust or envy, but still a nice rounded picture of a despicable person. Editing stuff, you have her Ms. Norris then later Mrs. Norris and a thee that should be the.
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