Wow this is really well done. I tend to avoid the poetry here but this caught my eye and I’m glad that I stopped to check it out. Ominous, creepy, and language that is easy to read and easier to visualize. You might be the first person to get 5 pencils from me for a poetry entry. Well done.

Wow! This entry was totally unexpected. It’s very good. I’m thoroughly creeped out! You know who some authors used quotes or poems to set-up their story that follows? This would be perfect for that!

This was nominated for the poetry ficly book.

That’s an awesome poem.