Very technical. Fortunate that I am a physics teacher and can decipher a lot of the short hand. I think I get a glimpse of his thoughts, but I would like more.
HE HI= High explosive, high impact? At first I thought the technical acronyms hurt your piece- until my eye sort of auto-wandered to the keyword section and saw that you had provided a handy dandy explanation. Then I liked it a lot more. Unless you are trying to use the end for “punch” reasons, I would like to know what/who is being tracked/attacked before the attack begins. Just my opinion though. It does seem tailor-made for the challenge.
stargazer1960
Robert Quick
Radical Yellow Duck
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