Got a few little typos that no one listened to , spelling of cigarettes, _ a pack of Camels_.

This is hysterically funny. Very last line could be a bit stronger.

old cronies! you left out something borrowed in the rhyme, unless that’s the person who walks her down the aisle! :P yeah the last line could be stronger, more emotional, or funny, taking it back to the cronies, but we all know she’s going down the aisle from the rhyme.

I loved it!!! Every moment. Very good.

Oh, how sweet. I can’t beleive that many generations of women are still alive in this house! Especially as the youngest is ready to marry. :)

Agreed with Elsha the last line could be a lot more powerful.