I liked this. Makes you think about the important things in life.

It was a lot longer, and I rearranged a couple paragraphs, working with the flow. Not sure it’s perfect, but it’s doing what I want it to do, conveying that sense of perspective.

How true, sometimes our pride gets in the way and we spend alot of time doing things that don’t mean as much to us. I like how in the end she humbled herself. If only it were that easy in real life.