I like this whole story, this individual portion of the storyline is going good as well. Keep it up, this really has a lot of different threads in the character’s motivations.

And there is a really rancid and dangerous version of gluttony. Nice job on that and having it add to the growing list of reasons why this is not going to end well for anyone.

Noo! Save Kara!
The problem with a vodka and McDonald’s diet is that it makes you see things.