“The grabs the fire to eat it.” — I spot an accidental capital T here with my editorial eye.

Very interesting view point. To me, when most people think about what it would be like to be dead they usually think in terms of life and the five senses. Who they’ll SEE, what they’ll FEEL, and even use terms like afterLIFE. But I feel like its closer to something entirely different, and mostly incomprehensible, from anything we have ever experienced. So I like that you are exploring this realm of thought openly and not contingent or biased by using life to explain or influence these timeless questions.

so is he dead or is he merely discombobulated? :P do you need to eat when you’re dead? i bet not that way..

This reminds me of the poem street corners, i think by gill scott herring, but has the same desperation only yours is drawing on a way more intense microdot kinda feel.

This reminds me of the poem street corners, i think by gill scott herring, but has the same desperation only yours is drawing on a way more intense microdot kinda feel.