I am thinking about attempting to acutaly write a full legth story latelyand i think this is how it would start. Let me know if you think it is worth continuing
Some grammatical issues: The wind calling out to you is more than the wind; it is the world. Each time you move you pull it along behind you. It flows filling your wake, it ripples, grows, and spreads, carrying you off for a new listener to hear. The last sentence should be reworded. Another who has learned to no more merely turn a blind ear.
I really like this. It is personal, and deep. If I were you I would make a sequel, and see where it goes from there. If the sequel works well enough, I would definitely go for the whole story idea. This is looking very nice.