I hope youn continue this. It seems a weak last line considering past zingers, but the story is looking awesome.

A few error in the fourth paragraph. Firstly, you don’t need a comma after ‘science teacher’, and secondly I think you mean ‘watch it spread’ :)

Other than that, awesome.

Edited. You have a keen eye- thank you. I am open to suggestions for the last line and I’ll think about it. I have an idea for a sequel but I’m not sure when I’ll have the opportunity to explore it. I’ll let you know if I do though. Cheers and thanks again!

Honestly, I just have too much time on my hands. Stranded at school :) I look forward to the sequel.

Honestly, I just have too much time on my hands. Stranded at school :) I look forward to the sequel.