Bizarre, mythical loveliness. The capricious fire was a nice touch, especially since I just finished some reading on primitive myths in which fire is characterized as female. Weird but cool and felt internally cohesive and consistent, like this is just the tip of a very large, entirely thought out plane of existence.

Thanks for the comment THX! :D I really appreciate it, po.

I was actually kinda inspired by that Dresden Codak comic about Dungeons and Discourse for this, though the connection is kinda loose, I think.
http://dresdencodak.com/2009/01/27/advanced-dungeons-and-discourse/

I agree with THX’s comment.
And the story is awesome, with the way you put humor in a kinda dark plot. XD

@Irene: Only the night is dark. XD Tnx sa comment! Add ka.:D