Simply lovely. But I must say (as a sailor) I do not agree with dying for my country to be complete (if that is what you were going for). But still a strong story and great writing. Kudos!

Actually, the sailor was complete b/c he finally brought back what he wanted to give to the kid. Thanks!

I really like this one. I wonder if you had the ending in mind all along and wrote the story end to beginning. Excellent writing nonetheless.