tampers is a word, but you did mean tapers. :) you fixed it, and gave us insight into the mind of this character, but there is no background, nor emotion. The scene is vivid, the burrs a nice detail thrown in, as well as the jacket, but other than a oneness with nature, you’ve got a lot of setting.
Wednesday [PJ] ((LoA))
ElshaHawk (LoA)