*can see where this is from" but thats just cause your in my class XD but back to the story. Is this a diary peice or an acutal letter? beucas eit sounds more like a diary but you set it up as a letter. so im a little confused. maybe make it as a frame?

It was suppose to be a letter, but more like a diary because whose she’s sending it to is dead. So the only one reading it is her…It’s not very clear.

Yeahi knew who it was to was dead. And thats what confused me aobut the construct

This has a beautiful feel to it. I think it would be better if it was a bit more separated…
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