Wow; the last line is a revelation. I certainly never expected the end. This is a brilliant story and I love how it captured all seven sins.

Wow! I just read these final 4 parts in a rush because the action was really flowing well. The story arc has a ton of great elements.
The (self-serving) motivations of all of the characters are well described.
The action is told well, I usually find it hard to describe hand to hand fighting, but your writing over the previous two stories was very well done.
The overarching plot is well laid out. Even though this (8 part?) ficly series covers a whole storyline, it feels like it could be a chapter in a much larger world.
I am glad I followed this story from the beginning, and I am more than satisfied with how it all ended. Well written.