Simple but poignant – makes you think, and ultimately I think I agree with what you’re saying… MH :)

I hate premature awakenings, they’re so embarrassing :P

I ditto MH’s comment…this was beautifully simple and short. For me, it had a feeling similar to Tennyson’s poem The Eagle

I love a poem that’s short and sweet, especially one so beautifully truthful and oh so simple. <3