Fantastic

I don’t know what this is, but I enjoyed it!

It is good and I like it.

Autobiographical maybe? It seems that way.

I enjoyed this Geebs, let’s be friends.

Love,
Zeromus from PA / Damon Beres

Geebs this was pretty great.

oh man, awesome!

a little ADD.. lol, but very creative! I’m left wondering where the dust came from?

Nice!

Love it.

Geebs this was excellent

so yeah obviously this is incredible

also comments have exactly the same character limit as stories? that’s kinda funny

This is fantastic, the style reminds me a bit of Metamorphosis.

Makes me ashamed I dare to post stories here.

Makes me ashamed I dare to post stories here.

I can’t remove comments. AWKWARD.

Thought I’d already commented on this, but very nicely done Geebs.

Very mind-provoking; good piece, Geebs!

Thoughtful and original both. Nice job!

Man, I wish I could think of something original to say, but it seems like everybody’s already used the praise I was planning to use. Ah well. I second all the praise everybody’s given! And congrats on the feature!

There could be a whole series of stories in the style of the last two paragraphs, which remind me of Invisible Cities. So suggestive. Really beautiful.

And now I’m thinking that Calvino would have been an awesome Ficly contributor.

wow, I realy loved this story, it’s really great :D

You got great imagery, man.

• sings * You’ve got to use your imagination!

I really liked this, even though I have no idea what was meant to be going on. The imagery was fantastic, and it especially appealed to one’s sense of sound.

Love how this makes me “feel” like I am actually there experiencing the words. Nicely done! TY!

love this! great flow. I’m so glad they update the featured stories more often rather than the maybe 3 months on ficly

ficlets* sorry

Whoa it’s like atoms are just like universe man trippy. No sir, I don’t like it.

My mind has been thoroughly blown.

For whatever reason, I think this is the sort of writing that people connect with the most… Just look at all the “classics” that are written in this sort of style!

You have hit the nail on the head, and as seemingly pointless as it sounded, it sounded great!

This reminds me of William Blake’s poem: “Am I not/ A fly like thee?/ Or art thou not/ A man like me?” Very good; I particularly like the closing line.

Wonderful, in an odd sort of way.

I very much enjoy the contemplative nature of the piece. It’s easy to relate to, as we’ve all had those moments of very strange and quirky thoughts. I’m reminded of Catcher in the Rye.

I really love this story.
@ Kevin: I agree. Definatly has a Catcher in the Rye vibe.

Also reminds me one of those really nice and genuinly great people that life just treats like crap, and you just have to get to know him to see that his imagination streches farther than most.

man you should give up the whole finding a job and just throw your life away on ficly because this story rocked

Love the imagination and promise of possibility. Awesome piece!

Damn near perfect, well done! TERRIFIC ending!

Dude that was really enjoyable.

Do you know why it rains? It’s because someone up there, just above the floorboards is pissing down onto us to wash away any imaginary beings that might be real. Little does he know how large the world under is…