Well Baraam it looks like you are in some deep s*** now. I can’t say i have any compassion for the clearly brutal pimp.

I will just comment here on the rest of the story, that first piece was spectacularly horrifying, the second and third both do a really good job of showing the kind of world this is all taking place in, and this final piece ends the way I think a ficly should end, with it open to interpretation and the suggestion of a very big story.

This is a wonderful piece. You have really captured the essence of the story. I don’t even know if it is set on a fictional world, sometime in the past or future, or here on modern day Earth.

Strange; I thought his girls implied his daughters. I’d say I was still innocent but we all know that isn’t truthful.

The last line is perfect. ‘Dead in every way that matters’ is such a fantastical concept.