IT LOOKS LIKE THE VIRGIN MARY!
Oh, right, it’s a two parter. DON’T WRITE TWO PARTERS ON FICLY, THE POINT IS TO KEEP IT WITHIN THE LIMIT.
Oh, right, it’s a two parter.
DON’T WRITE TWO PARTERS ON FICLY, THE POINT IS TO KEEP IT WITHIN THE LIMIT.
You need to check the grammar in the first paragraph, and the wordiness is worse than in part one. Really, I think it takes something away from the first part. It also completely lacks the ambiguous evocative feel.
You need to check the grammar in the first paragraph, and the wordiness is worse than in part one.
Really, I think it takes something away from the first part. It also completely lacks the ambiguous evocative feel.
Muse among Myths 
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