I like the continuation again; the plot thickens. It may be going a bit fast for my liking but I like easy breezy living.

One thing: would Citri be common knowledge? I thought of her as some veiled sorceress…

Great job rolling my insignificant character into something much larger. I like it and thanks for throwing on a sequel.

@PJ – I thought of her as some public figure, the head of an important group. But maybe you could explain how Kylun would know of her in the next installment.

@THX – thanks, I hope this continues :)

I may continue this but I also really want MH to!!!

yes, the plot thickens as the characters unite. :)