Haha; I loved how you used the quote <3

That was a great moment. Way tot turn the silly quote into something redemptive and triumphant for the poor guy.

Thanks guys!

I really liked how subtly you led the reader to find Sara a little hateful – so when you used the quote it was a real ‘standing ovation’ moment – go Wayne!

Good work here, ripe for sequelling as well as a decent standalone – MH :)