Ambiguous, who grabbed whom? Also, “His snaps his neck deftly”

Also kinda confused how he doesn’t see anybody else around but at the end a woman screams, apparently at the violence taking place in the story. She saw him, he couldn’t see her?

I agree with DoIt For Science about the confusing ending. Another sequel, though, may clear that up. I’m still liking the concept, but I believe it needs to be explored further, i.e. why is the man killing people, why do they appear to go to “his world”, etc. I’m still intrigued.

Doh! Missed the typo on editing…Im terrible at editing.