Comments on The Apolsi Crest: On to the Next Delivery by Elizabeth Gallenberg

Wednesday [PJ] ((LoA))

Wow. I mean that. Written beautifully and reinforces everything so far.

One thing, I think the first line needs sorting out. Maybe remove the ‘Keeping her eyes’ part?
- Posted over 9 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Elizabeth Gallenberg

Ahh, good catch. How embarrassing.

Thanks so much for the kind words!
- Posted over 9 years ago.
Wednesday [PJ] ((LoA))

No problem! I’m just excited to see where this is going!
- Posted over 9 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
smdasilva {LoA}

I like it! You gave Tannah a great backstory that gives lots of possibilities for future installments.
- Posted over 9 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
ElshaHawk (LoA)

Tannah now might throw a wrench into Citri’s plans. :) Nice details about the manacles and the skin smoothing!
- Posted over 9 years ago.
Marli

Following in the footsteps,E.G.
Really a strong moving series.
- Posted over 9 years ago.
- 5 out of 5