One thing, it wouldn’t be ‘me lord’ it would be m’lord.
The last line could be more of a zinger, unless this is going to be a series? If it is, I’m looking forward to it! I used to have a pretty big fascination with the Gods and different concepts of Hell. I have a fascination with everything, though.
Charon’s first line is absolutely mind-stonkingly hilarious – I physically laughed out loud!
I nice idea to see the ‘villain’ having to embark on the rather menial quest of finding a new ferryman – I think it could be quite the mythical farce if you continue and keep up the good work…
Conjoiner, Rejoinder, Poisoner, Concealer, Revelator [[Wednesday]]
Charlie K
Mostly Harmless