I liked it up until the part where the police officer asks “What are you saying about my son?” I think it would have been better without the last 2 lines.

And why wouldn’t this guy have them write him a cashier’s check? I doubt banks would give someone nearly a hundred thousand dollars in cash.

Thanks for commenting. And I guess he wanted to be completely done with the bank, and asked for it in cash.

Wow. People trust their wrong-doing sons more than non-wrong-doing strangers.

I feel the last line wasn’t needed, better to let the reader make that last leap after setting it up. I do like the twist! Makes the cop’s surly unreasonableness more believable. What a silly man the narrator is though =)