hahahahaha

I love this….very very funny. Nicely done, and I didn’t see the turnaround coming at all!

Well written.

Silly adventurers. They should get their directions sorted first before bothering people.

Nice work dude :)

How very Monty Python.

I laughed aloud at the finish.

Delightful!

This flows so well, and the last lines turns the comic situation into something, almost wistful. You convey her feelings very well with subtlety.