This strikes an odd tone between farce, mystery and drama – it’s interesting, and oddly, the pieces kind of fitted together…
I mean, the ‘bedonk-a-donk’ reference was a laugh out loud moment for it’s sheer absurdity, whereas the comment on the wine vintage was funny because it gave the impression that the narrator was a real connoisseur who just happened to be witnessing this moment – odd, but like I say, it worked!
The significance of the wine on the cello was indeterminable, but then maybe you have a solution as to how all of this led to Frank’s humiliation?
A sequel would be nice, but I do think this works as a quirky bit of storytelling on it’s own, so well done! MH :)
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