Shit; 12 views and no comments?! Thats almost an insult!!

I suppose that (attempted?) suicide is not the most favorable topic of discussion. I would be much more interested in both the precursor and the aftereffects than the event itself, but I’d think that few writers would dare to sequel or prequel a suicide story without some apprehension.
On a different note, the ellipses and commas, as well as the plural sheets and the singular it caught my eye in the not so good way.
I think it would be interesting to see an internal psychoanalysis of someone in the above state. Maybe I’ll shoot you a sequel with an attempt!