Nicely done.

haha. wonderful, Centipede

I really wasn’t expecting it to end like that, great job.

I would beat that girl stupid.

It wall all fine until she revealed it also doubled as a pleasure mode.

Dang, nice reveal Centi.

The only quibble I have is putting quotation marks around your dialogue. You’re not Cormac McCarthy.

The first paragraph feels a little clunky, but then the ending…

You made me laugh after I spent the day writing about regret and suicide. That’s something, I think.