Haha, nice. I’m a little confused though, it seems as though you say he left home voluntarily, and then you say he was exiled and imprisoned.
I enjoyed this. I got a bit lost in the first two paragraphs because I wasn’t all together sure what you were getting at, but once the story carried on it all came together and I chuckled heartily.
This is the best thing I have read on Ficly. Ever.
Centipede Damascus
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Muse among Myths