Aww. :-(
Bummer. I’m very impressed how much story you managed to squeeze into this, the character of the shipwright really comes across. A very succinct life story!
Bummer.
I’m very impressed how much story you managed to squeeze into this, the character of the shipwright really comes across. A very succinct life story!
Nice characterization and descriptions, though I think the repetition is a little overused, but I can see how it sets the reflective narrative tone.
nibbles on your ear everything will be all right.
nibbles on your ear
everything will be all right.