One big metaphor – life is a rollercoaster. But this actually happened last tuesday and we were on that freaking ride for like seven minutes…upsides down for ages!!! Grrr
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I remember us talking bout this.

I especially love the first paragraph, but I feel like the first sentence of the second paragraph isn’t needed. I could have got it without pointing it out and it kinda disrupts the flow.
Still, epic story. I love your stuff Abby. Tis awesum.

oh, what a horrible experience! the blood rushing to your head..
one spelling error: upside down, not upsides, unless you were being cutsie..
I like how the thoughts drift aimlessly into your mind in the morning in this piece. :) The only thing that threw me was the “my music” part. Oh, and I love the coffee ghost!

I guess you mean you were parking the car with the radio on, near the excited people and sounds of the fair. I like the soundtrack line, I just couldn’t envision what was going on at first.

“It’s as unfunny as a funeral. Mine?”

This cracked me up. I have a sick sense of humor perhaps. Abby, what a breath of fresh air, you’re as original as they come. And your prose is uncommonly poetic.