Well done.

Well done indeed! You’ve missed a full stop after your final word, but with regards to content you hint at an awful lot here, with a reasonably well-developed narrative voice considering it’s only six words long…

A stellar entry – MH :)

Thank you very much I’ll add the extra full stop. Can’t believe I missed it! Haha!

I like this one because the plot doesn’t imply death or killing

These super-short stories are cute, but usually don’t have enough to really consider. I think you’ve squeezed about as much plot as possible out of six words without resorting to non-standard structures (like the famous ad for baby shoes…)

The only criticism I can come up with is that the first line feels a little wooden, but I can’t think of how that can be fixed without adding to the length.