I love this! The idea of lucid dreaming is a really interesting one – and the hint at the end that all lucid dreaming may take place within one great big universal dreamscape is intriguing and inventive…

Good work with this one – it works well alone, or could be the start of a series of surreality – MH :)

I like the ending, I took it as a commentary on self loathing / internal self worth

I like the ending, I took it as a commentary on self loathing / internal self worth

Lucid dreaming’s a weird thing… cool, though. I’ve often wondered what it’d be like to dream in such a way that you can control it.

Great punchline. Or maybe it’s not one to some. Either way seems okay to me.