I like this mise-en-scene

This is a really neat concept.

Centi, have you read Liberation, by any chance? I dig this, and I think it has a sort of similar tone to it. Very cool, either way!

I’ll rock when I am good and ready.

Very nice concept, well-executed.

That’s all I really have to say! Try and watch out for superfluous words, they tend to crop up a lot in your writing. Ficly encourages you to keep it tight, so make sure you do!

Rocking after the apocalypse?

I like it. It could stand to feel a little more hurried, though.