Sounds like a piece of poetry you hear in a student bar. :)
Okay, so for me, I don’t like the last line. That may just be me. I’m a weird one. Chillax. But the poem itself is so calming and melodic and I can hear a drum before the drums begin and the sounds reverberate in my head and make me feel all giddy on the inside like when you hear a proper soul singer’s voice all deep and beautiful and I can see a silhouette climbing that ‘mountainous skyline’ and my heart flutters and oh, wow…